This one doesn't have a name, I half thought of the idea a few months back. Suppose it should be called Banging or Sorted or something.
She’d worn a lot of make up before.
It wasn’t as if she needed too. Clear complexion, what people called a caring, friendly face. Beautiful without make up.
Still, what
did he know. He was still off his head. Everyone was fucking beautiful at seven
in the morning after a heavy night.
“Coffee
okay?” she asked.
“Fine,
it’s great,” Rick replied. He nodded his head. The beat from the radio kicked
in. Just some rubbish on the local station but his mind picked out the bpm. His
head kept nodding, then from side to side. The club had been good last night.
Really good. The adrenalin from five hundred people watching you and dancing was
still there. Better than any drug that feeling was. Except caffeine of course.
He felt his head moving again as the song’s bpm increased. If he wasn’t careful
he’d be back up there again.
She’d
walked to the counter. It looked like she was on her own today. Only one other customer,
so not busy. Then again, who else wanted a coffee at seven on a Sunday morning?
Very limited customer base, that’s what he reckoned a marketing man would say.
He smiled as she looked over, then he turned away, realised he was probably
staring at her.
He
wondered where the chef was this morning. A lie in maybe? They were an item,
married possibly. That’s what everyone said. Some weeks he’d be in, all smiles
and big chef’s hat. Other times he wouldn’t be there. The make up: did it
correspond with those days? Did she only wear it when he wasn’t in? He couldn’t
remember.
He
looked at his coffee. Filter, but as good as something from an expensive machine with chrome and
steam. First pot of the day and freshly crushed beans, that was why. Always the perfect cuppa, every week. The
perfect way to kill the hour wait between train and bus. That was the problem
with Sunday mornings. They threw everything at getting you to London on a
Saturday night, but no thought of getting you back the next day. Council was
probably to blame. They usually are.
“Thanks,
love.” The other customer placed his mug on the counter and left. Dog walker. Rick
had seen him before once. A month or so ago maybe? Could be six months. He
looked at her again, caught her eye. She turned, back to the pile of muffins
and flapjacks. The make up was heavier than he’d seen before, especially around
the cheeks. He thought of telling her she didn’t need it, but it would come out
wrong. He’d mean it as a brother to his sister but it would sound corny. It
always did.
“On
your own today?”
He
turned, checked she was talking to him and not someone else or her phone. He cleared his throat. “Yeah. I don’t always get free tickets, so you know,
they don’t always come.” He looked at his coffee. That had come out wrong. Sounded
like his mates were only his mates for the free entry. That wasn’t the case, he
knew it. They actually paid their own entry sometimes. Well, they had once.
“Must
be tiring, all night I mean.” She polished the counter with a cloth, her eyes
on the muffins.
“You
get used to it,” he said. He didn’t mention the caffeine or adrenalin, nor the
pills that most of the dancers used.
He saw
her look at the clock, the hour was ticking by. A quarter of it left. He knew
he ought to get going, the bus didn’t hang around. With the next one at ten, he
didn’t dare miss it.
Drowning
the last of his coffee, he stood. “Better, you know.” She looked at him,
nodded. The makeup was heavier on her left side. Much heavier.
“See
you next week.”
He
smiled as he picked up his bag of records. “Bye.”
4 comments:
I do enjoy your style...even if it is in 'hors d'oevres' sized portions! Just leave the tray behind next time... ;-)
Thanks Kym. Unfortunately that was as far as I got with that one. I've got a few more ideas, so hopefully I'll get some more writing done this month but I've shot 50,000 words again.
Carry on Charlie! Where are these two going? I need to know! Was it deliberate that I assumed the woman working in the cafe was someone he'd woken up with? Nice juxtaposition. I shall keep nagging you to write more but congrats on your version of NaNo!
Thanks Jax. No that wasn't deliberate, it's just your mind that thought that! Reading it again, it's not clear it's in a cafe until a third of the way through, up until then it could be anywhere.
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